Legit, I think I read this like 15 times now (despite you telling me earlier there were no guns in your smush)

"Her smile only grew more uncontrollable when the doors almost shut on Jack before he noticed it was their floor."

Ha! I had to laugh at that. See, even Jack Fucking Bauer acts like a typical sex-addled male at times.

Anyway..gorgeous, hot, awesome, and I keep saying this, but I love your not-a-word-that-is-out-of-place-or-unneeded writing style.