*flails* aknhsfjkabhuighauizhfnkajsdfhaskj!!!!!!!! This is so so so so smushy and awesome!!!!!!
First of all, Renee and Jack in a jacuzzi together. With champagne and coconut-scented bubbles. GAH HOTNESS.
“I didn’t have a lot of time to think.” Jack sat up a touch and reached for his own champagne. “It was either this or my dick in a box.” HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. SO much love for that line.
“I’m not complaining. I got your dick in black boxer briefs.” She tilted her head to kiss his jaw. “And out of them.” That and her touching his thigh. HOT.
I love the entire next paragraph so much I can't even. "jostled her perspective like a snow globe" A+ comparison. You did such a great job of describing how he makes her feel so happy, both physically and emotionally.
His thumbs pressed into her muscles, hard, the tipping point between pleasure and pain. That line = fucking amazing. And you portrayed Jack SO well in that section because that's totally what he would do. With him, words aren't always necessary, but his actions say it all, and gaaaaaaah fuck me twice on Sunday you're so fucking good at getting into Jack and Renee's heads and knowing exactly what they would do.
The part about the scars made me sad. :( But that was so realistic and I could see it all happening- from Jack hesitating and not wanting to say it and him finally admitting that he was afraid she'd be repulsed by his scars and not wanting to make her feel that way and then her strong insistence that his scars didn't make her feel that way at all. Just. Love.
.Ideas and pictures floated in and out as she felt the lift of Jack’s chest behind her, the soft slow thud of his heart. That line is awesome. I love how it creates a calm and relaxed mood, and how she's able to be at peace and drift off and think about good memories and happy times and knowing that Jack makes her happy and just afjhsuifhnadf.
AWWWWW THE ENDING WITH THEM BEING HAPPY AND GOING TO BED TOGETHER AJAKDFHUAIBNAMBGAUHFNOIUAHNRFIUAHFGIUA HOLY TRIPLE CHOCOLATE FUCKCAKES MY HEART JUST MELTED FROM THE CUTENESS.
This fic made me so happy :) Thank you so much!!!! Seriously, everything you write is just so brilliant and amazing and I'm really glad I get to read it. :D
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First of all, Renee and Jack in a jacuzzi together. With champagne and coconut-scented bubbles. GAH HOTNESS.
“I didn’t have a lot of time to think.” Jack sat up a touch and reached for his own champagne. “It was either this or my dick in a box.” HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. SO much love for that line.
“I’m not complaining. I got your dick in black boxer briefs.” She tilted her head to kiss his jaw. “And out of them.” That and her touching his thigh. HOT.
I love the entire next paragraph so much I can't even. "jostled her perspective like a snow globe" A+ comparison. You did such a great job of describing how he makes her feel so happy, both physically and emotionally.
His thumbs pressed into her muscles, hard, the tipping point between pleasure and pain. That line = fucking amazing. And you portrayed Jack SO well in that section because that's totally what he would do. With him, words aren't always necessary, but his actions say it all, and gaaaaaaah fuck me twice on Sunday you're so fucking good at getting into Jack and Renee's heads and knowing exactly what they would do.
The part about the scars made me sad. :( But that was so realistic and I could see it all happening- from Jack hesitating and not wanting to say it and him finally admitting that he was afraid she'd be repulsed by his scars and not wanting to make her feel that way and then her strong insistence that his scars didn't make her feel that way at all. Just. Love.
.Ideas and pictures floated in and out as she felt the lift of Jack’s chest behind her, the soft slow thud of his heart. That line is awesome. I love how it creates a calm and relaxed mood, and how she's able to be at peace and drift off and think about good memories and happy times and knowing that Jack makes her happy and just afjhsuifhnadf.
AWWWWW THE ENDING WITH THEM BEING HAPPY AND GOING TO BED TOGETHER AJAKDFHUAIBNAMBGAUHFNOIUAHNRFIUAHFGIUA HOLY TRIPLE CHOCOLATE FUCKCAKES MY HEART JUST MELTED FROM THE CUTENESS.
This fic made me so happy :) Thank you so much!!!! Seriously, everything you write is just so brilliant and amazing and I'm really glad I get to read it. :D