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leigh57 ([personal profile] leigh57) wrote2010-09-19 05:35 pm
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Not that anybody should believe me even a little...

Shamelessly adapted from [livejournal.com profile] sardonicynic's recent post:

Pick a character or pairing from 24 (sorry to be so specific, but it's where my brain is right now), give me some a song lyric, and I will attempt at least 100 words of fic for you.

I know. I didn't write any of them last time. So I understand if you're all just like, PFT. However, my brain is in this mood where it just can't settle down, and I'd really like to find out if I'm capable of writing anything that doesn't turn into a thousand words minimum. I'm teaching all week, so I can mess with these at work, too:)

I think I'll cap it at 12 though, because even that's probably ambitious, given my recent success with prompts.

Crystal, I'm so excited to prompt you I'm squeaking;)
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Re: Jack/Renee [London Calling]

[identity profile] leigh57.livejournal.com 2010-09-28 12:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Well this is one of the few so far that managed to stay within comment length. I . . . fail at brevity in a way that is truly distressing.

I love J/R bed cuddles.

God, so do *I*. Seriously it's embarrassing how much of that I would write if it were only up to me and I never thought I needed even a nominal plot. I could read them snuggling in bed until the end of time, because I'm a huge dork like that. I'm glad you enjoyed this -- it was so much fun to write:)

(Anonymous) 2010-09-28 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I did not know about locked/unlocked, I have now been educated and feel far less of a creeper. (Maybe I should actually learn how to use my journal) :)

Well, seeing as you love winter, (even though I think that it should only be allowed to snow on Christmas day) I will retract my other prompt (You don't need to ruin your naked!free spree on my behalf:) and request a J/R for:

Emilie Mover - "Ordinary Day"

On Sunday afternoon we wake up,
to find that snow has fallen down

We should put our winter clothes on,
and go walking 'round.

[identity profile] tara-smith.livejournal.com 2010-09-28 04:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Here I am talking about feeling like less of a creeper, and I forget to login and leave an anonymous comment...Some Days.. :)
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[identity profile] leigh57.livejournal.com 2010-09-28 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
No worries! I figured out it was you from context anyway:)

And you're not the only one having a day. Only my day consists of bursting out laughing every ten seconds. Those are kinda fun!

I love that prompt. You do realize you're gonna get ridiculous squash, right? LOVE IT. I kinda wanna write it right now! Being a grownup makes me pouty. Hee.

eta: Apparently I'm also having a day where I can't type. Oy.
Edited 2010-09-28 16:59 (UTC)

Re: Jack/Renee [London Calling]

[identity profile] cybertoothtiger.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 01:45 am (UTC)(link)
Okay, you are killing me with the complexity of commenting on these. What what what? No wonder it takes me so long. Yeesh. Comment in right place, at last (I hope):

I am trying to imagine Jack and Renee on a bus tour, and the lulz are amazing. Jack would be off-grid and ignoring protocols at the first stop. Their poor tour director. Write that, puh-lease? *makes kitty eyes*

I went on a Contiki tour of Europe when I was 19 and there was a vice cop from New Zealand on our bus. He had a minor freak out and got all herd dog on us during our visit to the red light district in Amsterdam. Jack would be like that only X eleventy billion.

Jack getting shit for totaling an SUV made me snorffle so hard. Oh, Jack.

Re: Renee/Larry [Any place except your heart]

[identity profile] cybertoothtiger.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 01:47 am (UTC)(link)
*grumbles about comment weirdnesses*

Trying again:


Laaaarrrryyyy!

*sniffles*

I miss him so hard.

I love this. Although -- they're not going to make me play racquetball in heaven, are they? Please say no.


Just for kicks, I made a wordle out of your fic:



Guess which word occurred most often? Is that not perfect?
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Re: Renee/Larry [Any place except your heart]

[identity profile] leigh57.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 03:25 am (UTC)(link)
Oh god I can't even believe how much I miss Larry. It's actually sort of ridiculous, given my hatred of him through a decent chunk of S7. And now . . . AUGH. I was watching part of 7x19 the other day and I almost keeled over when Renee went to see his body. Meh.

And holy frak you made me a wordle! I'm DYING that coffee is the biggest word. That is . . . poetry. The wordle. Not my fic. Just to be clear.

I hope you don't have to play racquetball in heaven. I just kinda made that up;) Thank you!

Holy FRAK I need a non-goofy Larry icon. What is wrong with me?

Re: Renee/Larry [Any place except your heart]

[identity profile] cybertoothtiger.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 03:56 am (UTC)(link)
I like that right under 'coffee' it says front holding wants Jack time. Okay, so it actually says 'time Jack', but we know what it means, right?

I always loved Larry. Right from when he called Jack out for getting all up in his face. You go, Larry boy.
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Re: Renee/Larry [Any place except your heart]

[identity profile] leigh57.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 12:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I always loved Larry.

You're so evolved! I really kind of hated him in the beginning because he was such a big cockblocker to my ship. It's amusing (and so effing sad, now that we know everything) to go back and look at my post-ep reactions during S7. I can't remember when my Larry love finally kicked into gear for good, but it wasn't very long before he died. Woe!
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Re: Jack/Renee [London Calling]

[identity profile] leigh57.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 12:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Well this is one of the two so far that made it into comment length so far. Oy. I'm sorry it's so confusing! I tried to link directly to the story, but I guess that's confusing, too. Oh LJ.

Cinna only prompted me with this as a joke (because London is a big part of where my huge AU takes place), but I decided to do it anyway. I can't lie -- it was fun to just . . . not torment them for 500 words. Hee you want crack!fic with Jack and Renee on a bus tour? Why do I see it more as Jack dragging her to Africa or some shit and she's all, "Really? We couldn't have stayed at the Marriott?" LOL.

Thanks for commenting on my wee ficlet. Your thoughts always give me grins:)

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