I really liked this. "Whatever time is" and "Skin doesn't rip here" and how it's so viscerally in present tense.
I love Larry so much. I love your line about how much he cared about what happened to Renee AND Jack, because I think he really would, and I think he WOULD feel better to have her where he can keep a protective eye on her, even though the whole idea is ludicrous because they're fucking dead and ...
This whole thing seems so WELL thought out in the way that it so perfectly doesn't quite make sense. It feels real. Like the coffee and the idea of being in this perfect place but not having perfect emotions to go along with it. Clocks everywhere, but time doesn't matter. That she calls life "home" and she misses it, and the bathrobe and wanting to see blood. The emotions are just so ALIVE in her and it's all so perfectly contradictory, you know?
This is just SO FLIPPIN' COOL IS WHAT I MEAN TO SAY! Thank you for sharing, bb.
Meh. How come I don't have a Larry icon that's not silly?
Re: Renee/Larry [Any place except your heart]
I love Larry so much. I love your line about how much he cared about what happened to Renee AND Jack, because I think he really would, and I think he WOULD feel better to have her where he can keep a protective eye on her, even though the whole idea is ludicrous because they're fucking dead and ...
This whole thing seems so WELL thought out in the way that it so perfectly doesn't quite make sense. It feels real. Like the coffee and the idea of being in this perfect place but not having perfect emotions to go along with it. Clocks everywhere, but time doesn't matter. That she calls life "home" and she misses it, and the bathrobe and wanting to see blood. The emotions are just so ALIVE in her and it's all so perfectly contradictory, you know?
This is just SO FLIPPIN' COOL IS WHAT I MEAN TO SAY! Thank you for sharing, bb.
Meh. How come I don't have a Larry icon that's not silly?