ext_31764 ([identity profile] dealan311.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] leigh57 2011-01-17 11:15 pm (UTC)

Right so, I loved this. I will have more coherent words once I get come back from my meeting but this is a lovely thing to wake up to.

Also, while reading this, I missed the part about you ignoring the sniper and making him go poof, so at the end, I had this mental image of him sitting at the window, dying of boredom. You know, hours of having him pace around the room waiting, throwing pencils at the ceiling, doing a rubix cube, flipping through the newspaper, sitting in unusual positions in his chair- you know, regular stakeout stuff that he wouldn't be expecting to do because he didn't anticipate having to wait for Renee and Jack to sleep it off. And that's not taking into account if they go for round 2 when they wake up, which in my head happens, and then Tokarev groans because he's all, REALLY? AGAIN? GEEZ. I'M SO HUNGRY, I WANT A SANDWICH. CAN THEY PLEASE GET OUT OF THE ROOM ALREADY?

And of course, he misses the one time Renee steps out of the room because he finally couldn't hold it anymore and went to the bathroom only to catch a glimpse of her slipping back into the room when he got back.

I don't know why, but suddenly it all turned into a comedy in my head. LOL.

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