Dude I CAN'T write a scene with two chicks, because the shes and hers get me all gefrakked. Heh. I so never realized how hard it was until last night. Anyway. Well I'm glad the dialogue worked for you and you think it's actually them. You know how quickly I wrote this and it's such a not me way of approaching things, but I'm trying! Challenge fics done before vacation, man. Or uh, not.

I can never quite get over how close Jack and Renee did manage to get in a day, so you know I'm always gonna use that. And Kim was so adorable this season, all trying to do the right thing even though she wants Jack to listen to her. She's a better person than I am. I totally would have told him about the baby to make him change his mind. Thanks for talking me through this and pushing me to keep going when I was all in stall mode. <3