Holy fuckcakes, this is beyond amazing. It’s so beautifully written and it made me cry and I can’t even put into words how I felt while reading it.
I love the fact that even though Renee is in heaven, which is supposed to be this place of happiness and perfection and eternal bliss, she’d rather be back in real life with stained bathrooms and torn skin and blood if it meant she’d be with Jack. GAH. That made my heart explode.
the bitter veneer that shrink-wraps her words You seriously always write the most awesome phrases EVER.
Everything you said about time - there are clocks everywhere, but she doesn’t like to look at them and Time stretches, whatever time is, here.- is just so cool.
Larry! Your characterization of him is so epic, and fuck, the interaction between them is so perfect I can’t even. Larry wanting to be there for Renee and being sure she’s okay and the fact that he’s glad she’s there, but knowing how much she misses Jack. And I loved his face “changing expressions like a kaleidoscope.”
She smiles, muscles without meaning I can see that facial expression SO perfectly.
God, I just…don’t even know what to say. I just love this so much and you did such an amazing job of creating this setting and writing Larry and Renee and, as always, I am blown away by how talented you are.
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Re: Renee/Larry [Any place except your heart]
Date: 2010-09-23 02:26 am (UTC)I love the fact that even though Renee is in heaven, which is supposed to be this place of happiness and perfection and eternal bliss, she’d rather be back in real life with stained bathrooms and torn skin and blood if it meant she’d be with Jack. GAH. That made my heart explode.
the bitter veneer that shrink-wraps her words You seriously always write the most awesome phrases EVER.
Everything you said about time - there are clocks everywhere, but she doesn’t like to look at them and Time stretches, whatever time is, here.- is just so cool.
Larry! Your characterization of him is so epic, and fuck, the interaction between them is so perfect I can’t even. Larry wanting to be there for Renee and being sure she’s okay and the fact that he’s glad she’s there, but knowing how much she misses Jack. And I loved his face “changing expressions like a kaleidoscope.”
She smiles, muscles without meaning I can see that facial expression SO perfectly.
God, I just…don’t even know what to say. I just love this so much and you did such an amazing job of creating this setting and writing Larry and Renee and, as always, I am blown away by how talented you are.