I'm actually trying to keep up for once, and not be a giant douche and leave responses hanging for months or . . . something. So! Oh dude. Just thank you. You know I was on the fence about whether to even put this anywhere, because I fear the squash factor, but I'm with you on the idea that if you watched that scene . . . lol. Yeah.
It thrills me that the combo of awkwardness and weird openness translated. This is exactly how I see them in post sudden sex land. We caught a tiny moment of it, and it's totally how they were, but I wasn't sure I had it right at all.
As for his movement, we'll just skip the part where I ramble for 200 years about how pretty much, everything he did in S8 for her and I could die of shippy joy if it hadn't ended in such sucktastic suckiness;) honestly? I didn't think about the fact that he'd stopped for her. He just seemed to slow down once they got into bed. Ahahaha. I am lame.
Jack's voice. Ahem. Ahem. Ahem. Moving on.
As for the paragraph you quoted, wow I'm so glad you like it that much. It's one of those things where I wind up glad I waited a bit and screwed around with wording when I could have left it, because even though of course I never wind up loving things I write, I do think I got closer to the original idea of what I was trying to do there.
I love him to death, too. Oh, augh, oh my gods, DO I EVER? Yes.
THANK YOU. Now on to angsty message fic. If I can uh, figure out the other messages! <3
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Date: 2011-01-16 09:56 pm (UTC)It thrills me that the combo of awkwardness and weird openness translated. This is exactly how I see them in post sudden sex land. We caught a tiny moment of it, and it's totally how they were, but I wasn't sure I had it right at all.
As for his movement,
we'll just skip the part where I ramble for 200 years about how pretty much, everything he did in S8 for her and I could die of shippy joy if it hadn't ended in such sucktastic suckiness;)honestly? I didn't think about the fact that he'd stopped for her. He just seemed to slow down once they got into bed. Ahahaha. I am lame.Jack's voice. Ahem. Ahem. Ahem. Moving on.
As for the paragraph you quoted, wow I'm so glad you like it that much. It's one of those things where I wind up glad I waited a bit and screwed around with wording when I could have left it, because even though of course I never wind up loving things I write, I do think I got closer to the original idea of what I was trying to do there.
I love him to death, too. Oh, augh, oh my gods, DO I EVER? Yes.
THANK YOU. Now on to angsty message fic. If I can uh, figure out the other messages! <3