The mental picture you create for me here is so fabulous that I kind of want to watch it filmed, not only what I wrote, but exactly what you just wrote about Tokarev. I'm falling out thinking about him groaning when they get busy again (because duh, of course they're going for round two after their nap!) and then missing the one time she leaves the room because he has to pee like Mulder in "Arcadia." Hee! You are too frakking funny. (I just say 'frakking' all the time now, because I watch too much BSG like that.)
24 could use a metric fuckton little more comedy. But yes, I did have to get him out of the picture in order to be able to write this at all, so that's how it worked in my head anyway;)
I'm glad you loved it! I'm practicing Katie's advice, wherein I sit down and do nothing (no email, LJ, wtfever) but stare at the cursor for twenty minutes every day. It's amazing how writing always comes from this, because it turns out blinking cursors are really boring.
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Date: 2011-01-18 01:27 am (UTC)*snorffles more*
The mental picture you create for me here is so fabulous that I kind of want to watch it filmed, not only what I wrote, but exactly what you just wrote about Tokarev. I'm falling out thinking about him groaning when they get busy again (because duh, of course they're going for round two after their nap!) and then missing the one time she leaves the room because he has to pee like Mulder in "Arcadia." Hee! You are too frakking funny. (I just say 'frakking' all the time now, because I watch too much BSG like that.)
24 could use a
metric fucktonlittle more comedy. But yes, I did have to get him out of the picture in order to be able to write this at all, so that's how it worked in my head anyway;)I'm glad you loved it! I'm practicing Katie's advice, wherein I sit down and do nothing (no email, LJ, wtfever) but stare at the cursor for twenty minutes every day. It's amazing how writing always comes from this, because it turns out blinking cursors are really boring.