YAAAAAAAAAAAAY I'm so happy for you that you were able to get these prompts done and post! *hugs*
I know I say this all the time, but all the details you include enhance your stories SO much. The muscle in the side of Elliot's neck, his shoulders beginning to relax, the sugary aftertaste of the 7-Up- you always draw attention to things that I feel like most people would probably overlook when trying to picture these situations, but would notice if they were actually in them, and that's one of the many things that makes your writing so amazing. Everything is just so real.
that cocky confidence she wishes she could purchase in the candy aisle at 7-11. She pictures it in a shiny package, next to the Snickers and Whatchamacallits. How do you come up with these ideas? So cool.
kinetic energy and perpetual motion You and your awesome phrasing!!
She needs to work less and get laid more. Hehehe. A+ advice. XD
Probably no closer than usual, but for some reason, she’s warm before they even reach the elevator. Awww, this line made me happy and smushy! *squee*
I don't even have words to express how I feel about the last prompt, except for the fact that this was an absolutely perfect way to describe the uncomfortableness of being in a hospital waiting room.
These are so awesome! You're making me start to love these characters despite the fact that I've barely seen this show- even more proof of what a brilliant writer you are. ♥
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Date: 2010-06-01 06:04 am (UTC)I know I say this all the time, but all the details you include enhance your stories SO much. The muscle in the side of Elliot's neck, his shoulders beginning to relax, the sugary aftertaste of the 7-Up- you always draw attention to things that I feel like most people would probably overlook when trying to picture these situations, but would notice if they were actually in them, and that's one of the many things that makes your writing so amazing. Everything is just so real.
that cocky confidence she wishes she could purchase in the candy aisle at 7-11. She pictures it in a shiny package, next to the Snickers and Whatchamacallits. How do you come up with these ideas? So cool.
kinetic energy and perpetual motion You and your awesome phrasing!!
She needs to work less and get laid more. Hehehe. A+ advice. XD
Probably no closer than usual, but for some reason, she’s warm before they even reach the elevator. Awww, this line made me happy and smushy! *squee*
I don't even have words to express how I feel about the last prompt, except for the fact that this was an absolutely perfect way to describe the uncomfortableness of being in a hospital waiting room.
These are so awesome! You're making me start to love these characters despite the fact that I've barely seen this show- even more proof of what a brilliant writer you are. ♥